Open letter to God

Open letter to God

A Poem by Tamluvstowrite

You've known me long before I've know myself. As I have been on this journey call life I've been through more tragedies than triumphs. I've fallen by the waist side , my eyes to the sky  and my hands folded waiting for you to help me save myself. Listening and on my knees till there bloody red all I hear is the thunder clap and the lightning strike. Rains pouring washing away my tears drowning out my screams.Feel like giving up cause there isn't any clarity in my life. I walk through the fire and on many of occasion burn to a crisp. Yet I live to see another day. I figure it out I'm waiting on  miracle to happen. My energy is low but my faith is strong. 

What I am asking you today is to give me a bit of inspiration to go on yet another day. With every lost it inspires me to fight a little harder. With the bad I wait for some good. With this open letter I hope you hear me because  I'm all out of a way to make it another day.

No more drama if only for a short while, don't want to end my era on a sad note. I want my own  dreams nobody else. I want no one else good life accept the one I create. All I'm asking if for you to guide me on this treacherous road. All I know is that I refuse to walk out of my journey until I reach what it is I'm searching for.

© 2008 Tamluvstowrite


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Wow. Brutally honest and very vivid. I can see exactly what you're trying to say in this one, and can easily relate to it. Kudos to you. Keep it up, and God bless!

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Tamluvstowrite
Tamluvstowrite

Buffalo, NY



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I am a mother of six beautiful children. Writing is my true passion. This is something I do even if I never receive one red cent for. I love expressing myself. I have a deep passion for leaving a me.. more..

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