Don't Be Another Line.

Between the lines,

I can see the demon in disguise.

Can you see it, now?

I can see it, now.

 

I see you, now.

 

Somehow, you fooled us all.

Somehow, you rode right by.

Someday, you're going to see

I opposite of what you want of me.

Someday, you'll break down.

And I am

Here waiting.

 

I see you, now.

 

Believe the hype.

Fall to the types,

But I'll never bend that way,

Never turn one way,

Never break that way.

 

I could see it, but

Reality is thin.

Reality's here,

And we don't need

 

Your acception.

I will not feed into

Your deception.

The line's not drawn,

 

It's practically impaved,

And

No more banana in the tailpipe.

I've grown bored.

 

The paint is fresh.

It's on you hands.

Hungry for flesh,

The beast tries to free himself.

 

And yet, he digs his grave,

And no one's going to catch him,

If he begins to

Fall in.

 

Now, I can see between the lines.

And I won't be another line.

 

Stand up and fight,

You've got the right,

The strength,

And all that s**t.

For all that it's

Worth, you're still winning.

 

Live your lies,

Because I'll live mines, too.

I'll never be like you.

I think that's good.

I see you, now.

Reviews

[Nicole]

This was an interesting read, I really enjoyed it. :)
And "no more banana in the tailpipe" made me Laugh Out Loud.
My friends were looking at me weird. O.o

[The Weirdo, The Geniuse..]

"No more banana in the tailpipe" lol

[Thomas B. Buckman]

I like this.
Im intrigued by what it might mean.

[Jessi]

I like it

[GoodIntentiionz]

I like your concept, your idea. You have the little odd rhyme thrown in there every now and then, and the flow gets slightly choppy at times, but I'm not paying attention to that.

Who are you talking to? Satan? I find this poem very interesting, I congratulate you.
Also, I like the emotion in it. Balanced very well.