[untitled]

It's pretty short for me, because I had to leave right in the middle of it. It doesn't really rhyme all that much, But blah.

I'm so confused.

You've trapped me in,

But you've done it plenty of times before.

I can't remember a time

Where I felt so lost.

Will someone pull me out of this hole?

For, I'm craving a freedom

In this spiderweb you've spun

'Cause I know it's just begun,

But never ends.

You need another prey

I don't wanna waste away

In your grasp.

It's just another sad day in my life.

It's just another miserble time

To be alive.

And when the prey stands up ad tries to be strong...¹

I haven't craved for freedom in so long,

It's just amazing.²

Author's Note

1.)Actually, there was something after that,
But I thought it didn't sound right.
2.)That wasn't originally there. Because I had to leave, it ended on the last line so I finished it cause I can do that.=]]

Reviews

[wizthom]

when the hunter gets captured by the prey,
it can be a tangle web of rejection love the write meaning behind it,peace wizthom

[AaronPhobia]

pretty cool. i have tried writing a poem before... disaster, i am only good at writing stories ] =

-Aaron

[Delightfully Demented]

That was really cool! I have tried doing some poems before but i dont think mine are good. ^_^ '