Dead Last.

I wrote it last year, Thinking life was over And there was no reason to try anymore.

I wish I had a life to live for.

I wish I had some peace before war.

Now everything is so unstable.

When's it gonna end?

Not eventually;

There's no more time to spend.

 

Now, I'm a dummy in this crash test.

Oh dear, at least I did my best.

I tried to keep my balance on this

Tiny thread of life.

I give, already,

'Cause I'm tired of the strife.

 

Look down on me,

I'll be the fall girl now.

It's my turn in the whole.

I'll make it out somehow.

 

So..you can see my life through your eyes?

Not even I can do that;

You're so wise.

I hate to say it

But this is not my place.

It's not my life now.

The owner is now space.

 

Fall down on me,

And tell me who to be.

I'm not in second now,

I'm dead last.

I studied hard but still

I failed the test.

Oh dear, at least I tried

My very best.

Author's Note

It's really personal and has a lot more meaning to the words then they appear.
I was slightly depressed when I wrote this.

Reviews

[wizthom]

when u go inside urself u bring out the best as u did with this creation ,
i felt the pain,,,wizthom

[Delightfully Demented]

^o^ it was really good! So sad too but i like sad poems.

[AaronPhobia]

O.o i liked it :)) =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD was sooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddd but Sarah said it isn't you so yeah so it isnt you lol buttttttttt it was sooooo awesoommmeeeee

sorry i like to do fun stuff :) lol :)))

-Aaron

[Sarah J Dhue]

Good, but it doesn't sound like you. You enjoy life and you have plenty to live for. :