Emptiness in the Morning Sun

Emptiness in the morning star

Hatred in the evening sky

Shallow in the clear water

Wilderness in the forest green

Light in the darkest soul

Darkness in the lightest heart

Weakness in the bravest soldier

Strength in the weakest man

Faith in the suspicious life

Doubtful in the Kindness sun

Reviews

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This is very absorbing . I can feel layers of human mind captured just at few lines. Very creative and great flow too.

[Dave]

Yes! I see a litany of sadness. As I read it I felt so sympathetic to you. I sincerely hope that the day brightened for you.

I must say you certainly conveyed the extremes of emptiness very well.

Take care - Dave