Stabbed Heart

For my heart

Stabbed heart with ache

Thy blood ooze with hatred

For my hatred gives pain

With this pain that confuses

Heart with ache

Life have given

By sorrow of love

I vanquish with smile

Hiding this pain

With my friends that helps

Thy sorrow of love

And broken with smile

Author's Note

please correct my poem if it need corrections...
Thank you

Reviews

[Saxophoneguy]

It is very good, however I feel like you might be using "thy" as a way to express authenticity.