Floater

A Poem by J.L. Herrera

Love poem

Hope swims in
With all the sin
I followed the pleasures
Found out I don’t need them

Inside my head I was alive
Just a loon with no task
Take me away

My mouth with a fat tongue
And lies like daggers
Then I woke up
And felt the happiness

With you in a stride
By my side
I felt new and alive
It’s OK
I’m coming around

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