You're CUT!

Todays mood: Happily apathetically depressed

Oh emo

Does it hurt more when the mascera hits your eyes?

Oh emo

Does surburban life just make you want to cry?

Oh Oh Oh emo

Do the whiney songs just touch your soul?

Does your on and off girlfriend just want to be alone?

Oh emo

Does your tight jeans chaffe when you walk to school?

Oh emo

Does kissing other boys make you feel cool?

Oh Oh Oh emo

Does looking like s**t make you feel scene?

Will all of those scars really help things?

Oh emo

When you look back on this will it bring memories?

Oh emo

Will the poems of your pain really solve anything?

Oh Oh Oh emo

Does looking like s**t really tell them you tried?

Because all that I see is a stereotype....

 

 

Reviews

[L. S. Kearnes]

Very interesting feel to this one. Unsure of your tone, whether you tried to be hostile or not. If you did, then great job.

Although I'm not sure who's doing the stereotyping, you or the emo ...

Great work though. Wonderful rhythm, and you get your point across.
Keep it up and welcome to WC