Trust

 

The flame of friendship that I wanted to hold has been snuffed out and died of cold

 

I’m kind of grateful for the stone you threw – didn’t mean to but you still knew

 

Exactly how you’d make me feel – but you just pretended it wasn’t real

 

And as I walked out of that door I knew it was the final straw

 

No more will I need you at all – you stepped aside and let me fall

 

You disrespected me and killed my trust – so go ahead do what you must

 

But don’t expect me to just wait – you left me with nothing but hate

Reviews

[JEWLDUST]

Wonderfuly done, I dont trust many people anymore.

[D. Elizabeth]

OMG jon I loved this! absolutely honest, and real, so beautiful in it's purity. I have written many poems of friendships torn apart. I can relate to this, and have fallen in love with this piece. KUDOS to you jon, Kudos to you. xo -D.E.

[O!]

oooooooooooooooooooo............very strong feelings......glad u softened them a bit with the rhyme.

x,
O!