Left Behind

Left Behind

A Poem by Talia M.
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Expressing the lonliness of one who has lost a loved one

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You're up there, happy
Dancing down the streets of gold
But you left me here

© 2018 Talia M.


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I like it a lot, well done. Maybe add too it later on, but I like it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This poem is really sooo short but it shows your feelings about your loved one good job and try to expand your poems . Keep writing (((smiles)))😊😊😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


Talia M.

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your feedback!
It's a haiku, so it is supposed to be short.
I'm not all tha.. read more
Taniska  😊😊

6 Years Ago

Ohh sorry I don't know sooo then it's a great poem okk 😋😋😄 smiles

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Added on November 11, 2018
Last Updated on November 11, 2018
Tags: loss, sadness, heaven, grief

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Talia M.
Talia M.

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Hello! I'm Talia. I write almost every day. It's one of my main hobbies, aside from drawing. I'll get a spark of inspiration from one of my vivid dreams or something I see on Pinterest and just have t.. more..

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