Spring

Spring

A Poem by Takoda Sorvillo

The smell of flowers 
The warm, soft air 
All these sent's, with all these powers 
All these pleasures they cannot share 
All the things they can't be ours 
And how they do not care

© 2014 Takoda Sorvillo


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I like where you are going with this poem but I think you meant to use the word sense instead of sent's.
Great Job Takoda look forward to reading more..
-maria rose


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Takoda Sorvillo
Takoda Sorvillo

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I am a High school student who has always had a passion for writing. Who also is a horrible speller. My favourite color is a deep form of red. I play guitar decently well, and love solitude. I am a Sa.. more..

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