Dream Girl

Six word story practice in brevity.

We finally met at her funeral.

Author's Note

Written for a six-word story contest.

Reviews

[Nicole Schuster]

Scrolling through the reviews already posted to this work, I see that they say the same things that I would have. I love this. It can be taken so many different ways, and that's what's so interesting about it. The concept of loving but meeting too late is incredibly deep and thoughtful, and completely entrancing. Beautiful, beautiful work. Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on second place :)

[Takeshi Yamada]

Thank you, Nicole! Without your contest, I would never have been inspired to write this. Much gratitude.

[Chinmay]

You amaze me time and again. Yes, I've thought about "dream girl" a lot. (I mean writing or reading stuff related to that title) but you surprised me with those six witty words. You just turned the tables dude ! Never thought 'dream girl' and 'funeral' in the same story can exist.

[Takeshi Yamada]

Haha! Indeed...I feel sad for the subject of this story, but there's always the next life!

[Archos]

Oh, it's just a note or something... And HOLY CRAP you just blew my mind with six words (8 actually the title is really important) I'm going to think about these words for a while if you don't mind. Great job!

[Takeshi Yamada]

Archos, thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Mr. Hamilton]

I think rather, it was his.

[Takeshi Yamada]

Oooh...very deep and witty six-word response! I'm honored you thought it worthy...and maybe you're right.

[Tsubaki Kuro]

Truly wonderful. I love it. Very dark in a way but also very mysterious.

[Takeshi Yamada]

Thanks Tsubaki, glad you enjoyed it.

[Tsubaki Kuro]

You barely just commented on this. It's been two months.

[Takeshi Yamada]

Haha...yep. Better late than never, I guess?

[Tsubaki Kuro]

LOL yeah. that is funny.

[Solar]

A perfect Nano Noir! Leaving the reader to piece the rest..

[Takeshi Yamada]

Hehe, letting the reader do all the heavy lifting. ;)