I'm Lost

Another fail song hahaha i wrote this while throwing a tantrum about having to move from Australia to Germany so, yet another one i wrote when i was 13 bleck

I try so hard
But it’s not good enough
The world expects more
More than I can give
I lost all that I love
My friends, my home, my life

I’m lost
I can’t find my way
I’m suffocating
And I can’t runaway

I wait until the day
The day that I’ll be saved
Saved from my meaningless life
The life that’s tearing me apart

I’m lost
I can’t find my way
I’m suffocating
And I can’t runaway

But I won’t give up
I will get it all back
I’ll fight this horrid pain
That’s slowly killing me

I’m lost
I can’t find my way
But no matter the cost
I’m gonna find me today

Author's Note

once again, i wrote it when i was 13 so its terrible hahaha

Reviews

[alexlessah]

its not horrible thats for sure. its very good.

I don't think this is terrible. I think the same way about my poetry. I like this it's full of emotion.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

For a 13 year old at the time of writing I find it not to shabby at all. Reluctant to express raw emotion, but grammatically sound and a good flow, well done.

[Emunah June.]

Its not bad at all. I loved how you were able to so cleanly express your emotions.

[Ben Taylor]

Hey, it's not really bad at all :) I quite liked it. And by the way, that's a freaking long way to move. Hardcore :p

[Murtuza]

It isn't as 'terrible' as you think. You have shown your emotions well and captured the despair of truly being lost and put down. I like how you've ended with the last two stanzas. Well done :)