Kiss

Kiss

A Poem by Sammie
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Well.. when you have a kiss, how does it feel? I tried my best to translate *my* kisses into a poem.. enjoy, xoxo. =]

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Lashes pointed downward,

your arms around my waist,

and right now, I'm careless.

Happy as can be,

totally care-free..

and then..

weightless, euhporia, beautiful.

I'm weak for now, completely blinded.

I love the way you touch me,

your fingers lingering on my skin.

Hold me..

I'm your's completely and for taking..

Careful, I'm fragile.

Protect me,

Love me,

forever..

© 2008 Sammie


Author's Note

Sammie
It's not flowy, I know. Kinda.. how I felt.

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I really like this. I can deff. relate to this poem as well. Very good job. ILY

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awe, don't underestimate yourself, sweetheart! This was beautiful and descriptive and I loved it. You're doing great. I wrote one about a kiss, too. I'll have to send you a read request.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A wonderful poem, isn't it great to be in love? Nice Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful sammie...

Your imagery is very evocative and powerful and the reader is able to feel what you are feeling.
Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


A nice love poem

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really liked this. It was really pretty. You did an excellent job!
My favorite parts were:
"Lashes pointed downward,
your arms around my waist,
and right now, I'm careless."
&
"Careful, I'm fragile.
Protect me,
Love me,
forever.."

Excellent poem!!!!


-Elissa :D



Posted 16 Years Ago



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Sammie

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