Pure Poetry...
A Poem by Tai Chi Italy Take Two
A poetic thought that makes me smile
So good to see us
together, alone, apart
upon stage of hearts.
© 2011 Tai Chi Italy Take Two
Reviews
|
that last line, wow, "upon stage of hearts." really nice, this indeed is small, and short and simple appearing and yet is speaks so much.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
Hmmm, wow! So few words that describe an entire lifetime. This is wonderful!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
actors in a time forgotten, a past revealed, a future held, your words
speak volumes, beautifully done Tai.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
so much in so little words - a stage of hearts - but the dance of humanity - nice!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
Tai you said so much in three lines and the meaning I read is beautiful!
Chloe
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
such a talent in writing so much in such a little space :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
|
|
Stats
372 Views
6 Reviews
Added on April 19, 2011
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Related Writing
People who liked this story also liked..
|