Dear God

Dear God

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy Take Two
"

For my son's George, Kim and Ross

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Please take care of my sons

Protect them from evil men.

Comfort them

when I cannot be with them.


Give them strength to stand

Up, and with your love,

DEFEND THEM.


Amen

© 2010 Tai Chi Italy Take Two


Author's Note

Tai Chi Italy Take Two
helpless mother. Crit most welcome. Speechless

In the face of

INJUSTICE

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wow, i love the powerful sance you take,the guardian wish, and a soft prayer
the emanates from the heart, poetically invented to such a degree of
true desire for the better good, the protective nature of your words
have an ambience of strength and standing up for what is right. you've
done an excellent job with this. i'm looking forward to reading more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I wonderfully written prayer, when all else fails it takes strength to ask for help even from the all knowing God above.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow, i love the powerful sance you take,the guardian wish, and a soft prayer
the emanates from the heart, poetically invented to such a degree of
true desire for the better good, the protective nature of your words
have an ambience of strength and standing up for what is right. you've
done an excellent job with this. i'm looking forward to reading more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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