When all we have

A love poem

 

When all you have

is little me.

My personality.

When all I have

is big you.

Feelings wrenched and blue.

When all we have

is each other to cling to,

Why let go?

When we both know

it will be

our final blow.

My ego cries out

for your ego,

So please,

I beg of you

Never

completely let me go.

For I will surely die.

Relieve me.

Stop

making me cry

Out in this darkness

Of never again.

When all you have,

is all I need.

Feel free

For the love of God

give me all you can.

Allow us both

to proceed in peace.

Be my ethereal man.

I promise

to do my best

Not to get greedy.

I am willing

to share you 

my love.

Whatever it takes

I wish to sink in you.

Hold you in my bay,

Even in distance,

Only you can keep

Our agony away.

Author's Note

It's a love thing we can't ignore...

Reviews

[Hellslastwarrior]

Heya lovely poem really bled your emotions into this piece i very much enjoyed it and defently think you should write more of this poem,
A little suggestion - take a look at this verse
is big you.
Feelings wrenched and blue.
It feels kind of awkward on the tongue as i read it out.
I love this verse
Never
It showed
completely let me go.
thought you did a great jobb here and it hits the nail directly on the head with how naturally humans struggle to let go to people they grow aattached to. Enjoyed this read and think you should take a look at some my work if you get the chance. Thanks for the good write.




For I will surely die.

Relieve me.