Un-Entitled...

I wanted to write a love poem...

 

 

But I don't want to be a fraud.

I don't want to be boring either.

Love gone wrong. Dead love.

Bad love. Sad love.

I want to write about touching hands.

That quiver in the pit of the stomach.

That glow that only true lovers know.

I really cannot bare my soul to lie.

I want to say, Ilove you, and I will do, till my dying day.

I want to write a love poem

About the union of we two. One that is light and fluffy.

Full of real pleasure, and true. One that is so hot,

to read it, would burn the essence

of our purest sensual  buzz 

deep into the heart, where it will grow

Because my lover,

Our blissful union will show!

And the whole damned wide world

have the right to glow.

Author's Note

I haven't written a love poem for a while...thought I would stretch my wings, feeling a little buzz...

Smiling at you

Reviews

[Gandré]

would burn the essence

of our purest sensual buzz --------- I loved this metaphor, it is murmuring of love..it sounds like you really enjoyed writing this love poem.. and you have many memories you will forever carry with you, this I read here, too.. the poem flows freely, has good rhythm and rhyme, but more importantly, bears precious moments of poets life. warmest regards, lara

[Rapterj]

A nice little stretch it seems. I love how the poem builds until the conclusion. I'm also a fan of your vibrant and strong prose. Very beautiful.

[the_stoic]

you understand emotions is all i can say .. lucky will be the man who gets to be loved by you ..