Repetitive...But No Strain!

A little erotica to lighten the way....

   

 

 

She makes him blush
She makes his heart rush
Pumping him full of desire.
She touches his soul

 

 Soothes his spirit.
Satisfies his inner fire.
Quenches him.
Wrenches him,

 

 From his melancholic doom
Fills his heart
With sensual excitement
Here it boom!

 

 She drives him gently,
Smoothly. 
She steers him,
Into his high noon!

 

 Removing his frown.
Killing his doubt
Making him happily,
Scream and shout.

 

 Oh yes baby…
She will do it all,
Over and over  again…Repetitive?  Yes!…
But your pleasure is to her,

 

Absolutely no strain.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Repetitive Strain Injury is a serious condition affecting many millions of writers and keyboarders all over the globe.....In this woman's life, in Erotic terms, is the only area this condition has not doused her lifes flame....Written 2006

Reviews

[Gandré]

She steers him,
Into his high noon!-------------- this metaphor says to me - he is older. She makes him feel life again. Wonderful. I think people don't have enough love with free sex without boundaries. Yes, they have promiscuous sex, but this is different category. I liked the poem, for it says, how enthusiastic free sex can heal anything and even makes people feel younger. Sex is life! Unconstrained love, which may or may not be the love of mothers for their children, is what enables women to fulfill themselves and become free. this was a great poem.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ah, sexy Tai.. The poem is lovely and so sensual .. love the words you used .. and the repetition..
Anais would like this one .. so do I.. Gorgeous imagery. Text color=my favorite.

Chloe

[Lloyd Lofthouse]

For sure this kind of repeition is a strain to be desired. Yes...Yes....Yes....
That's why it is absolutely no strain. Easy flowing style enjoyed.

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

I spotted one gramatical error, but it didn't detract from the seductiveness of the poem. The loose rhyming gave it a laid back, comfortable feel that I could respect even if this poem didn't really appeal to me. You didn't get too vivid, but you did create quite a picture in my mind with your words. That is the art of poetry. Bravo.

[J.P.O.et]

Ah, don't we all love a lil bit of erotica now and then
This is tastefully and eloquently put, what else to expect
from such a damn fine writer
Always a pleasure LLB
J.P.O.et