What You Do For Her
A Poem by
Tai Chi Italy Take Two
It is amazing how a name can change your point of view. This particular poets name takes her back to a gentler time of new life beginning....
Your name conjures up the most tranquil of feelings
Sending her on a journey to magical times.
Twilight! A sparkling multi coloured vista of
Blue bells under foot.
Hands holding hands.
Following a carpet of evergreen
Under comforting canopy of children’s excited voices.
Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze.
Rustling, crunching, snapping twigs….
A carpet to heavenly blue
Together as a family
That is what your name means to her.
She sees it, she reads it, and she hears it
And immediately she feels happy.
© 2008 Tai Chi Italy Take Two
Author's Note
Inspired by Forest Green
Featured Review
This is so beautifull, OMG
'Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze'
Your inspiration is evident in your writing for this is stunning
I am so glad I checked this, cause I woulda missed something
Thank You so much,LLB
J.P.O.et
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
what should i say ... that's what her name does to me ( i am a man ) .. i still her name but turn back to see no one ... your character is lucky is all i can say
Posted 14 Years Ago
what should i say ... that's what her name does to me ( i am a man ) .. i still her name but turn back to see no one ... your character is lucky is all i can say
You've described the place magnificently...'rustling, crunching, snapping twigs...a carpet to heavenly blue, together as a family...'
Beauty and happiness subdued by the somberness of captured moments; providing tranquility when it is most needed.
Wonderful poem...! One of your best!
Daniel
Posted 16 Years Ago
You've described the place magnificently...'rustling, crunching, snapping twigs...a carpet to heavenly blue, together as a family...'
Beauty and happiness subdued by the somberness of captured moments; providing tranquility when it is most needed.
Wonderful poem...! One of your best!
Daniel
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
an absolute beautiful work of art. i love it. thank you for writing a review for a poem i had written quite a while ago. the woman i was talking about, Jacqueline, is one of them women that i had a hard time getting over, but then i found the woman im planning to marrie, my true love. ever sence then Jacqueline was out of my mind, gone. my new love, Courtney, is my world now. i love her, as some of my other poems say. :D thank you very much for reviewing my poem. your poem that im reviewing on is a very good one. again, i love it. ill be back for more inspiring literature later perhaps.
Posted 16 Years Ago
an absolute beautiful work of art. i love it. thank you for writing a review for a poem i had written quite a while ago. the woman i was talking about, Jacqueline, is one of them women that i had a hard time getting over, but then i found the woman im planning to marrie, my true love. ever sence then Jacqueline was out of my mind, gone. my new love, Courtney, is my world now. i love her, as some of my other poems say. :D thank you very much for reviewing my poem. your poem that im reviewing on is a very good one. again, i love it. ill be back for more inspiring literature later perhaps.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Lovely job. Bluebells are utterly beautiful. They go so well with May time, especially in the woods of English counties like, erm, Sussex?
Posted 16 Years Ago
Lovely job. Bluebells are utterly beautiful. They go so well with May time, especially in the woods of English counties like, erm, Sussex?
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I love this poem! It brought back some really great memories that I forgot I had.
Great work!
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love this poem! It brought back some really great memories that I forgot I had.
Great work!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
This is so beautifull, OMG
'Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze'
Your inspiration is evident in your writing for this is stunning
I am so glad I checked this, cause I woulda missed something
Thank You so much,LLB
J.P.O.et
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is so beautifull, OMG
'Tiny feet tripping through the evenings gentle breeze'
Your inspiration is evident in your writing for this is stunning
I am so glad I checked this, cause I woulda missed something
Thank You so much,LLB
J.P.O.et
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Such a beautiful and poignant write.
Memories are the building blocks of tomorrow, imo.
You've done wonderfully with this write. To me it symbolises the love of what was, with the realisation of needing to move forwards.
Bravo!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Such a beautiful and poignant write.
Memories are the building blocks of tomorrow, imo.
You've done wonderfully with this write. To me it symbolises the love of what was, with the realisation of needing to move forwards.
Bravo!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
wow loved the middle. i wish there was a place lke that. i wish i felt that way when i heard someones name.
currently, i hear gunshots and rage. haha. love is a battleground for me.
Posted 16 Years Ago
wow loved the middle. i wish there was a place lke that. i wish i felt that way when i heard someones name.
currently, i hear gunshots and rage. haha. love is a battleground for me.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I love it,, wow, you really wrote this poem well, great ideas, thoughts, meaning and flow.
Much enjoyed =)
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love it,, wow, you really wrote this poem well, great ideas, thoughts, meaning and flow.
Much enjoyed =)
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Stats
306 Views
9 Reviews
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on March 9, 2008
Related Writing
People who liked this story also liked..