Obamasong!

Obamasong!

A Poem by Dr. T.A. Ermurd
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In support of our dear prez!!!!!!! <3

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Obama gave us freedom!
Obama gave us hope!
Obama gave us fun!
Obama gave us phones!

Obama shot some some b-ball!
Obama played some golf!

Obama took from the rich!
Obama gave it to the poor!

Obama raised our taxes!
So Obama took from the poor!
And gave it back to the rich!

Obama!
Obama!
Obama!

Obama helped the gays!
Obama let them get married!
So now they can get divorced in 2 years!

Obama killed Osama!
Right from Washington!
Obama didn't need soldiers' help!
Obama did it himself!

Obama cares for all of us!
That's why he wants our guns!
An Obama on every street corner!
Keeping us all safe!

Obama!
Obama!
Obama!




© 2013 Dr. T.A. Ermurd


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Pretty damn funny!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hhhmmm, erm, I don't know what to say about this x'D I'm guessng you're not a supporter though? :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't know if you're for or against Obama...but I like him xD There's always a dark side to politics anyway, and nobody is always gonna agree with every policy...but he's making a good try :L
Liked it, the only bit where the flow gets clunky for me is at;
"Obama raised our taxes!
So Obama took from the poor!
And gave it back to the rich!"
Too many syllables in the middle line for me when the others were much shorter...
Up to you how you take that, just (I think...) constructive criticism =)


Posted 11 Years Ago


oh mama

Posted 11 Years Ago


A cleverly written poem, leaving one pondering the circumstances. Great wright xD

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Dr. T.A. Ermurd
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I am someone who is interested in the effects of religion on unsuspecting people. I like to write about my studies. I have a self-granted doctorate in these experiments and such. I have also recent.. more..

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