"Low Life" (2008)

"Low Life" (2008)

A Poem by Natacha

Low life..
sitting in bed...

  As I am laying out all of my plans .
for a calendar year...

still marked the times and dates in red ...

circling priorities but
ripping out the pages

of each month

 

instead

another load of...' duties and dreams to  sort through and  fold perfectly ..

as it lays awaiting..in a pile

 

of procrastionation 

 



static that clings to your fanatasies...


     
  The ink has dried..

 

 

over your scribbled intangible  outlines of your daydreams ...

.

 

  I  can still make out the imprints of your thoughts


I need another pen...

 

 

 

for you to catch

 

 to grasp over


my words

that   are entangled  and lost on this page
    

 

 












 

© 2010 Natacha


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This was amazing and powerful piece that screams volume. I enjoy your work so much. I am about to take another wonderful trip with some more of your poetry. I like the layout. It added drama as well as hit your message home with the reader. This piece contains every living and breathing person personality at some point in their lives. Fantastic, Great, Wonderful, Amazing and Awesome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Superb writing, totally enjoyed reading this poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 5, 2008
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Natacha
Natacha

San Diego, CA



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I used to write when I was younger and always loved creativity in whatever shape or form music,singing,art,dance,etc.. After the age of 15-I did not write until I was 31 ...in 2005 I just started to w.. more..

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