jazz soul--2006

Jazz Soul --- My blues soliloquy

 I dream in color.. My soul harmonizes in bluesy melodic jazz notes ...the sax solo sighs somberly....lee ,Dee ,Dee, DA Dee . . My voice cries out in melancholy ..tones and paints shades of turquoise and midnight sky hues The notes  fluid like the waves on the shores of Cannes
. My soul is jazz All the colors posses a mood or a shade..as the tenor sax riffs right into my blues.

 As my song lingers endlessly .with ;lust ,with a sigh timidly,fearlessly It's you ,it's us,it's I..

 It cries out and speaks to me in ashy moody tones ,in pastels.

 It cries out abstract
It lingers long after the beat had departed .

It dances shamelessly with the rhythm as if time did not exist ;The rhythm and groove beats in my head as my hips,and sorrows sway to the distant tenor sax..

My soliloquy the night cap to all the thoughts and words said and unsaid.

The timbre in my voice whispers loudly in mahogany earth-tone sounds .

Don't tiptoe around my harmonies or my space or sound .

Let them freely whisper loudly .....without restrictions, fluid and free like the woman I'm becoming limitless , unbound- simply- Me
Dance , if you feel my rhythm wherever it may be.

You may catch the lingering beat fluid ,abstract;
As the notes are for you
And for me...

Melodic is my song..
 My blues ..
My soliloquy
 It sings out...
 lee ,DA  dee,la ,Dee.....

Reviews

[distefano 401]

i really liked how you used color in this poem, capturing not only the reader's sense of sound, but also a visual sense. one of my favorite lines was "it's you. it's us. it's i." good write.