My kind of girl.

what I look for in a girlfriend.

I want a girl.

with the sweetest of smiles.

whos light can be seen for miles.

You dont need makeup

I already think you are great.

Who doesnt believe in the word hate.

 

I want a girl.

who knows who she is.

a leader so true.

of course she has to look good in blue.

 

She will run in a field of green.

she is never mean.

She stole my hat. a chase ensued.

just to bargain with a kiss.

 

We dont have to act our age.

swing and games.

we will have our own silly names.

 

I can be cuddle bear

she will be my lady

lovely and fair.

Thats my kind of girl.

Reviews

[rivers]

The felicity of sweetness found in this poem is refreshing...There are things we want and things we need. I love the playful lightness of the imagery. No great expectations and yet complex simplicity while keeping expectations real. Nice writing.

[Stacey Watts]

This is very sweet. The words flow gently. It is nice when you find a mate that inspires such beautiful words. Excellent work.

[emman]

This s.is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet..I like the imagery here..so easy to picture out ..great! nice! :)

[Tabitha t]

which part did you want me to read... the part about mispelling or the sappy love poem part? either way message understood

[Ramya]

Sweet and great imagery. I love the flow, the usage of simple words. The 3rd stanza is lovely!
Keep them coming:)

[Marie]

First spell "Gril" right. And read my profile.

[Renée]

Very Sweet Poem Tabitha ! ( :

[Tabitha t]

ole country aint bad! I am very irish and live in the country maybe that is why.

[MoriartyMesa]

This might sound strange, but this seemed very Irish. It has that 'ole country' feel about it.