My kind of girl.

what I look for in a girlfriend.

I want a girl.

with the sweetest of smiles.

whos light can be seen for miles.

You dont need makeup

I already think you are great.

Who doesnt believe in the word hate.

 

I want a girl.

who knows who she is.

a leader so true.

of course she has to look good in blue.

 

She will run in a field of green.

she is never mean.

She stole my hat. a chase ensued.

just to bargain with a kiss.

 

We dont have to act our age.

swing and games.

we will have our own silly names.

 

I can be cuddle bear

she will be my lady

lovely and fair.

Thats my kind of girl.

Reviews

[Destiny Crawford]

The emotion flowing through this is just beautiful :) This peice alone can show anyone that you are an amazing writer!!! Keep on writing! You are very good at it ;)

~Destiny

[A. V. Madison]

Really cute. I totally love this poem. It really speaks loud. Bravo.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Sooo cute...and brings a warmth when reading :D

[Extant]

[This is one of those 'awwww' moments, I don't do that.]
But, yes, must look good in blue. It's sweet. *Smile* And genuine, and happy, that's important.

[Cathy Wattam]

A sweet poem but missing punctuation and could possibly flow better if you stuck to the rhyming scheme or alternatively abandoned it altogether.

Also, "whos light can be seen for miles." - should say "whose light can be seen for miles". Nothing wrong with the sentiments expressed, just a little tidying up needed.

[Brittany]

The words are sweet. Personally, I'd change some punctuation. And I'm not sure if you were following a rhyme scheme or not, but I'd pick all rhyme or none at all.

[Heather]

Very touching! Good job.

[murrill]

Great poem.

[Luciole]

Aww how sweet! This is a very cute poem. I loved the third stanza especially,

"She will run in a field of green.
she is never mean.
She stole my hat. a chase ensued.
just to bargain with a kiss"

Very nice! Haha I could see myself doing that to a partner xD

[The White Wolf]

Yeah, that is pretty much what I look for in a guy too :) I like the whole "has to look good in blue" bit, that was cute! It made me giggle because it is funny to me how we all like silly little things like that. Super sweet, Tabitha. Was a very nice read to start my morning!