My kind of girl.

what I look for in a girlfriend.

I want a girl.

with the sweetest of smiles.

whos light can be seen for miles.

You dont need makeup

I already think you are great.

Who doesnt believe in the word hate.

 

I want a girl.

who knows who she is.

a leader so true.

of course she has to look good in blue.

 

She will run in a field of green.

she is never mean.

She stole my hat. a chase ensued.

just to bargain with a kiss.

 

We dont have to act our age.

swing and games.

we will have our own silly names.

 

I can be cuddle bear

she will be my lady

lovely and fair.

Thats my kind of girl.

Reviews

[Mirabella]

It's beautiful.. Simple, honest.. Well done!

[x]

Very good and beautifully spoken :)

[Emberlorna]

A beautiful peace of poetry, enjoyed reading your writing :}

[cloud]

The characterizations you speak of are well worth searching for. You have a virtuous nature to your writing that is admirable. Nice penning.

[Toni Blackerby]

I love it it has character

[Tabitha t]

thanks!

[Toni Blackerby]

ur welcome

[Scytheriax]

The meter is a little off, but if I think of it more as free-form poetry, I don't have as big an issue with it. I'm not sure if you were going for a specific meter, but if you were, you may want to revise some lines so it flows a bit more smoothly.
Some more consistent capitalization schemes would help as well.
I liked the diction of the piece. It's sweet and almost naive at times. It reminds me of the voice of a younger person looking for their dream princess in a way.
It's a cute poem. I liked it.

[Marina]

I agree with JustJenn. You've got something but maybe if you read it aloud to yourself you will notice the meter. There is an innocence and almost naivety which I love. You are onto something. Well done.

[TawnyBlueStar]

nice ^^
really sweet and not stereotypical :D I like it ^^

[justjenn_2u]

It could be a great poem, but the meter is not there. Not that your idea isn't good, just need to get a flow going here. Just constructive critiszm.

[no sun]

simple statement done adorably. great write!!