Living in the country

Living in the country

A Poem by Tabitha t

Living in the country,

Where the sun always shines.

Where we always dance in lines.

Im proud to live in the country

 

Sun kissed skin

Straw colored Hair

im country.

 

I wear boots on my feet

Sweetly paired with a cowboy hat on my brow.

My voice has a twang

and I can throw a swing.

I can play with the boys

Dirt dont scare me

 

I may be tough

but I still taste sweet

 

Hills of green

and streams of blue

Everything beautiful

surrounds me

 

Livin in the country

Where the sun always shine.

Where we always dance in lines

Im proud to be country.

© 2012 Tabitha t


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Tabitha is tied with Tennessee.
She is proud to live in the country.
Great poem.



Posted 12 Years Ago


This reminded me of the stories my Georgia born Wife tells. She is sweet as honey, and can handle herself, too...
This is an upbeat piece which leaves the reader smiling.
Great structure and precise words form an outstanding poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You live in a beautiful part of the country, I can see why you would be proud of it. But then most people love the place they grew up, it is after all home, not matter how far away we go.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a cool poem, i'm attracted to it because i've pictured myself someday living in a serene country setting, and this poem brings to my mind serenity. Lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know how it feels to live in the country :D
I am glad that you enjoy every bit of being country, most people complain.
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That so cool. Love the little two liner part "I may be tough but I still taste sweet". Kudos.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a warmthful statement, and I like it very much. It seems we only hear about people who wish they lived somewhere else, and so this is freshing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!
I've never lived in the country..
But i wish i could!
This is such a superb beautiful write.
Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I live in tennessee. I doubt i could never leave this place. I have the best of two worlds the city and the country

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Tabitha t
Tabitha t

Pigeon Forge, TN



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