Emotional turmoil.

Emotional turmoil.

A Poem by thoughtfuldreamer

There's a lump in my heart,
I cannot fathom its shape.
There's a sense of sadness,
I cannot seem to escape.

Still I hold on,
Evading confounding tears.
They ache to break free,
From me, from all my fears.

When will it cease?
This emotional turmoil.
Pointless is the wait,
For the future to uncoil.

© 2017 thoughtfuldreamer


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thoughtfuldreamer
I'm a hobbyist writer. Any comments or advice is very welcome :)

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Love the rhythm and flow of the poem! Really great job with capturing the emotion behind this poem!

Thanks for entering this for the inspiration contest!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thoughtfuldreamer

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your encouragement:) meant every word.
I enjoyed this poem. I go through emotional turmoils at times, and half the time I don't know the sadness that lumps in my throat. Good job on capturing a picture with words that can leave someone else feeling the same way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thoughtfuldreamer

7 Years Ago

Even though sad, it's helpful to hear that someone can relate to it. Thanks for sharing.

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Tags: emotion, fear, future, strength, rhyme

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thoughtfuldreamer

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