You Don't Know Me

You Don't Know Me

A Poem by Hanakuso
"

At the end of the day, it's not your name I write in my diary.

"

Mine.

Despair reeks here

Those dreams of you and I

They keep returning, screaming

Calling out your name and ripping me

Into pieces that can never be sewed together

I try to sleep and fight back those nightmares of you

And my summer light slowly fades away from in the dark

Every ardent shattered bit fading away in the dim windless sky

You look at me fondly with what you call love in your eyes

And what I see as madness perpetuated deep inside

Your grapple with my soul, trying to take back

What was never yours in the first place

You cry and I cry at the thought

But every tear we shed are

Useless since I will be

Always will be

Yours.

© 2012 Hanakuso


Author's Note

Hanakuso
This was written for him. Excuse the angst.

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this is beautiful..i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
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dunnia

12 Years Ago

your welcome :)
wow! really awesome, no need to excuse for your feelings Hanakuso! i am an activist to writing to people,it's alot easier that way, and plus sometimes you don't even have to show it! great work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

Yes! This! This so much. Thank you very much, that really jolted me out of my slump! *hugs*
beautiful dreamer

12 Years Ago

yay! i'm glad *hugs back* :D
oi lurrve you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

I love you more, okay, shut up, Markus. :)
Wow... the layout is amazing... It is really creative...
My favorite line is "But every tear we shed are useless because I will be always will be yours." .. I can totally relate...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Love does that to people, doesn't it? It's hard to resist, nggh.
Meallea Pomorette

12 Years Ago

I agree...
The layout is just lovely and creative.
This is beautiful but a bit sad.

My favorite part was:

"Your grapple with my soul, trying to take back what was never yours in the first place"

Very pleasing indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Monsieur Blade! I appreciate the feedback!
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This was absolutely beautiful and breathtaking and heartbreaking. I love the rhombus, *ahem*, diamond form here. The flow was wonderful and... I guess the best way to describe this is you made me shed a tear. And that's rare.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hanakuso

12 Years Ago

"Rhombus", huh? I guess I learned a new shape today, OTL.

Thank you so much. Your comp.. read more
:-)

12 Years Ago

My pleasure. And my math teacher makes us call it a rhombus, xD

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Added on November 11, 2012
Last Updated on November 21, 2012
Tags: love, life, infidelity

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Hanakuso
Hanakuso

Philippines



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