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A Poem by siri
"

this isnt really a poem just a saying.

"

It isn't the beauty that has dissapeared.

It is we who have stopped looking for it.

© 2008 siri


Author's Note

siri
so people stop only thinking about how your life is so bad! there is some1 out there that has it worse instead of thinking everything negative stop and smell the roses and look at the sky and admire how pretty the clouds are or how beautiful the stars life is only as good as u make it

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You make a very good point, siri. The beauty is there for those who would look for it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well i understand being an optimistic person is good.
But Im just a pessimistic who can't find joy out of life so far
There is no joy in beauty of color for me
because Im colorblind
There is no joy in emotion for me
I have borderline personality disorder.
But i understand this...saying.
its good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


how true! short and sweet. perfect. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow, i needed to hear those words today.This was so direct.I feel lyke ive been onli thinking about the bad in my lyfe and now, I realize that there is good that ignore. thanx.

Posted 16 Years Ago


perfect.
short,direct and full of wisdom.
I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well I think it's beautiful none the less...

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great poem Siri, short and to the point, just like I love it. I try to find beauty in everything that I see and do, and by simply doing this, I am a happier person.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! It is really quite beautiful and true.
What a great message!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ironically, or perhaps not, this is beautiful. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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