blind

blind

A Poem by siri
"

this isnt really a poem just a saying.

"

It isn't the beauty that has dissapeared.

It is we who have stopped looking for it.

© 2008 siri


Author's Note

siri
so people stop only thinking about how your life is so bad! there is some1 out there that has it worse instead of thinking everything negative stop and smell the roses and look at the sky and admire how pretty the clouds are or how beautiful the stars life is only as good as u make it

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Isn't this the truth, Simply well put!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i agree so much!
when you concentrate on the bad, you arent focusing on the present..you're either worried of the past or future usually. sometimes people should just be optimistic and be hopeful so are minds aren't worrying and so we can literally stop to smell the roses. ..
good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmm the minimalist! So philosophical =p ( I'm teasing, I think it's neat!)

Posted 14 Years Ago


yes true but what happens when the sky sky is blue and you are too your sick an tierd of your life to just complain that what

Posted 14 Years Ago


agree with you..
nice writing..love it

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sometimes for people to get to the point it just takes a few words. This is really true. Nice job

Posted 15 Years Ago


I agree so many people think that they have it worse off and maybe they do or did...but they shouldnt always look toward the bad in life...even though there is a lot...but to enjoy life and treat others with respect and soon they will earn others respect.
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is very good :]
It short but gets write to the point
I loved it

Great job

,BrittneyMarie

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very true. Nicely put.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short but to the point. I feel like beauty is so overrated...
So focused on the physical... we forget to appreciate the mental.
Beauty plus knowledge plus character... u should have it all

Posted 16 Years Ago



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