glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

wow this crazy ahhhh crazy AHHHH sigh of relief.....scratch scratch rewind

water bubbles blasted and spurted

particles of green and yellow and blue

prime to create and make us believe what we think is true

blind by obliderations and sacraficed blood build up

essential life salts to burn out our eyes with others souls

destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth

 

glitched out brains responding once but thinking twice then backtracking to repeat the exact same g g g g glitched out idea

to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means

and now our eyes are oppen

seeing horror in our to do list

making SCREAMS become a normal society trait

 

Author's Note

fucked my choose blast forward stop!

Reviews

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

i love what your trying to do here cause that happens to me. so much is going through my mind i just write it all down into one condensed piece of several ideas. i throughly enjoy your first stanza. all sorts and mixed up as it may be it works

[chris' girlfriend]

wow thats an awesome poem!!!!!

[Sarah]

Wow, this was such a fun time to read. XD I love it. It's so random, and yet almost makes sense somehow? (: I really loved the line "to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means" Great job!

[R. L. Ambar]

Random, yes, yes indeed...wel written....

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Rocher

[Kiri J]

wow... damn kid i love your twisted brain waves.
this is rad.

yes, i did just say rad. and i meant it.
oh i miss you, Siri, write to me and tell me things, those things of yours that brighten the moments i spend reading them!
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[Heidi Hallucination]

very very deep i love it