glitched ou....g..g...gli...glitched out brain

wow this crazy ahhhh crazy AHHHH sigh of relief.....scratch scratch rewind

water bubbles blasted and spurted

particles of green and yellow and blue

prime to create and make us believe what we think is true

blind by obliderations and sacraficed blood build up

essential life salts to burn out our eyes with others souls

destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth

 

glitched out brains responding once but thinking twice then backtracking to repeat the exact same g g g g glitched out idea

to confuse our confused idea on what confusion really means

and now our eyes are oppen

seeing horror in our to do list

making SCREAMS become a normal society trait

 

Author's Note

fucked my choose blast forward stop!

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very interesting concept....I liked it!!

[J.A.N]

Ohmy, I can't even describe the trip my brain went on
when I read this, quite amazing.

[The Analog Kid]

Random, but neat idea and compressed with many motifs!

[shayne]

thumbs up! this is a great piece!

[Keli Renee]

Dude, that line about the confusion is what made my heart stutter.
I think that was the first time I fell in love with a poem on WC.
Feel loved, my comrade in pencils, feel loved. ^-^

Oh, and btw, I read your about me.
I really REALLY think I'm gonna like reading more of your work.

[Seracies]

Wow. The first few lines screwed with my mind, the imagery was really forceful, but in a good way.
I liked the mood of, how it fit a number of topics depending on how you looked at it. Very nicely done.

[ArieannexAntithetic]

Wow....I love this because it just clicks with me you know?
Lol now that you've written that do u feel relieved? Yes? Me too! =D
I love where it says "destroy our picture of "perfect" reality to realease the truth"
So true! Love it! *hugglez*

[Enigma]

Whoa!! That was AGAIN very powerful and strong. *shivers due to the impact*
Great write!! Went like BAM! straight into my head...
You're great at this...!!
Excellent!! Nicely written... ^_^

[Angel's Lady]

I sense a glitch. Hmmm.
You must feel better now! ;)

[EliJoLee]

woww.
random but intense.
i absolutely love it.