A release

A release… a world…a mind…control seems so far away… a color as sad as the chemical released from a single note my ear grabs and holds onto…this note in succession with others considered a miner scale… it seems thoughts melt with right and wrong, black and white, good and evil… there is a time when we meet our shadow intimate darkness that tastes so good we get swallowed in it…greed and power… I look at her and the red flower that fell down by her feet… time frozen as memories erase from her mind… the stare proved I’m no longer accepted and a single touch to perfect skin still warm in my painted world with hatred… my shadow spreads like a plague and my only item  that held and shared my once unforgotten love skips time… the rose held more then a pretty appearance…  it held memories and feelings that turned white with time it dried and shriveled a single step closer she destroys the colorless white rose to powder and it disappeared with the wind and that’s when the light turned off.

Reviews

[Kriss]

I really like this, I love your description. It paints a perfect picture, and I can actually feel the emotion emanating from it. It's great! I also really enjoyed reading your bio. That was awesome! you've got a great personality and your a great writer! keep it up!

♥Kriss

[Heidi Hallucination]

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love it. i don't know how to describe it but i love it so much awesome job


-Heidi (Harley)