broken wings of love

a heart break song that i wrote

my prity buttrfly
with wing flaping
so gracefuly shes
the trees shes the stars
shes vision u are my light
attach the wings of love
with me and lets take
flight

 

from god to god 
from land to sky
we will do as we plz
we will not die
i am the vains she is
the blood i carry her
with the wings of love

 

the broken wings of,... of love they fly
so high wings of love they
will not die!wings of love
u cant denie wings of love
from the godess obove she
gives u love in exchange
for your tears she whaches
you heart break and feeds
off your greates feers

 

(screemo)
SHE FEEDS OFF YOUR GREATEST FEARS!
DRINKS YOUR BLOOD DRINKS YOUR TEARS
GIVE HER POWER WHACH HER GROW SHE
KILLS US ALL WITH THE GREATEST FEELING
THAT U KNOW!

Reviews

[AJ Rosterbom]

I love the idea and the imagery you put into it and as a song I think it would be great. The only problem I see here is the misspelled words and some grammatical errors. n_n;; I believe a few editing jobs would do the trick. :)

[Morgan A Lynch]

this has a good ring to it and i also like the screaming .. my kind of music.. good job.

[Sarah]

Oh my, it's a song! O= That's exciting~ The imagery in this was very pretty & I loved the second stanza about flying from god to god through the sky. Very powerful. ^_^

[Mercury Mirrors]

I luv this one so much its my fave. =] I wanna hear you sing it for me....plzz?