Siting here in pain

As i sit here in pain

Knowing not wat to do

With pain so bad

With pain so hurting

I can not control

What i can't change

So i just sit here in pain

Knowing not wat to do

Reviews

[Shadow666]

Some of your words are misspelled, like "What" Also, use caps at the beginning of your sentences, and fix your grammar up a bit. Then this poem can be more easily read and reviewed.