Cold dead tears

As fist fly

blood is shead

some people end up dead

with a cold pale face

there hands at their wasit

people cry out in fear

with cold dead tears

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Wow, hard, in your face reality bites type of write.. This is a well written piece. Most people think of tears as hot or scalding. "Cold dead tears"- great phrase.. Nicely done!!

[Cassandra D.]

O_o
This was cool :)
I'm not saying that just to be nice. It reminds me of the other poem I read. It was very interesting, and the rhyming was totally cool.

"blood is shead
some people end up dead"
I'm not trying to sound emo or weird, but that part was cool >:)