Blood spilled

As blood is spilled

on a desrted battle field

lifes are lost

hero's are made

fighting for people

not for them self or for fame

Reviews

[~Shadow Kissed~]

Flows well and brings an important point across. Very good.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this
Great Job

[Tina Kline]

I think this is a very wonderful short poem
about what soliders are doing fighting
in wars. A nice tribute to all the military men
and women.

[Denni]

i love this! its short but powerful

[syrus]

yep is a war poem

[Cassandra D.]

This was an amazing and short poem ever!
But, just to make sure I'm talking about the right subject, is this a war poem?
It seems like it to me!

Either way, it was very good for a short poem! :)
Very well written.