absence is blue

 

 

 

 

 

 

Absence is blue
here with out you.
My purple-shine rose
You are shrouded
As the golden armored knight

Does your sword

of silver tongued valour
Hold me in your heart
Forever true
As we are
two souls bonded together
in life time adventures
While we Danced
in
 the twilight sun.

Maybe  its a dream
Love nothing 

but
  a fairy–tale page

Absence is blue
is here now
 To lie 
awake without you

 

Reviews

[JC Fox]

A beautiful poem and one day we all wish for that knight in shining armor or at least a frog prince.

[KnightofCups]

Heartbreaking , never fear, your knight shall fly to you on silver wings oneday.

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked this one! A sweet tale of loss i think, And of missing one that you love.
I feel that it could have been broken up a little to make it flow smoother, but the word choice and line sequence was perfect
Good job!