trust

trust is a
cherished thing
fragile like a
baby bird
a gift to be
protected

when wielded like
a sword
it slices
it terrifies

there is nowhere
to turn
when your trust
is your abuser

Reviews

[Broken Wings]

Good description of trust used. Trust is so easily abused and it is especially hard if it is abused by someone close to you, who is supposed to protect it. Sadly, they are the ones you let close enough to you so they are able to abuse it. A good write.

[Inspiring Writer]

Yeh, that's a great write on Trust. You've well defined about trust in your own few words. First stanza's great and it's really nicely penned. The words you chosen here to write are powerful and having meanings. If you want to be happy with someone you gotta have some trust on someone before it's too late... but sometimes this trust hurts much and break you deeply from inside... but this's a life and we all know more about life after got some hurt //it's true. Your this write is awesome and makes me crazy to think on it too and make my own too. Keeeep writing, you're going very well.
Great write!