Sunset at the beach

Mirror on the sand
Swallowing the falling sun
Fishes leap for joy

Reviews

[tynamite]

Yeah haikus are hard to write. You spend ages trying to find the right words and slot them in to match the 5 7 5 syllable format and then read it and try to swap the words to make them better words and most times you can't. I know.

[Symplydymple]

just wanted to try my hands on a haiku