The major theme of this work being "Lost of a dear one" is some each an every one of us is common with..., no one is immune to suffering the pain and grievance as here the poet is in. It'll be prompting us to ask many whys, like to God- why should He allow such to happen to us, and to death- we do want to know why it is being wicked. And from what the poet expressed, she felt the most pain as it dawns on her that no matter how many the whys, the dead person cannot come back to live... "THe WHYS are now too many, That's all I hear. And then it hits me, The WHYS won't bring you back..". Amazing write.... Bona!
The major theme of this work being "Lost of a dear one" is some each an every one of us is common with..., no one is immune to suffering the pain and grievance as here the poet is in. It'll be prompting us to ask many whys, like to God- why should He allow such to happen to us, and to death- we do want to know why it is being wicked. And from what the poet expressed, she felt the most pain as it dawns on her that no matter how many the whys, the dead person cannot come back to live... "THe WHYS are now too many, That's all I hear. And then it hits me, The WHYS won't bring you back..". Amazing write.... Bona!
a lovely tale about the land of the immortals. they won't be coming back, though they seem to wish they were. dark, words well placed. I like this, I like the length of the lines and the rhyming structure. Nice write.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you Jesserose!
Glad you like it...I wrote this poem 3 years ago after I lost s.. read moreThank you Jesserose!
Glad you like it...I wrote this poem 3 years ago after I lost someone close to me. The words kept flowing as the tears pour down my cheeks.