DNA

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My silence betrays me like DNA simmering ere seething

Like a sickle soothing by corn

Ululating malevolence, jubilating when others gnash their teeth

Dematerializing in a realm of juvenile abhor

Oh my DNA

Oh my pulchritude and altered DNA

Forlornly receding happiness, hides in the catacombs

where it's firmness wears out and helix recoil

Bending my jollity into submission

O' my DNA

Oh my DNA.

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Reviews

[Joan Probst]

Sympathize with this because I too find sometimes that my DNA betrays me. I would suggest that you calm down on the vocabulary and focus on getting your point across. Loved it! Keep it up!

[angelina neves]

nice poem. I like it : the idea and the write.

[Sami Khalil]

A feast of words and lines in a very creative way or ways. Excellent...Keep it up...:).............
Copying is the best form of flattery.

[L.C. Jarrette]

how do you do that?urrgh! you're so good. can you teach me? you know,some tips might help. :)

[duff]

This is ridiculous and I mean that in the best way possible. There is a lot going on here in just a sliver of lines.

"Dematerializing in a realm of juvenile abhor"
I like it. It's got attitude and you did a nice job.

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

Thank you...

[duff]

Very welcome:)

[apennylate]

A jolting array of vocabulary... I see you are learning how to make mini-flow landscapes in your lines... That is ALL writing poems is about...! You are nailing it, and I am impressed...! Keep at it, and wonderfully penned...!

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

Thank you I was trying to copy you a bit... I mean your latest poem

[apennylate]

I can see that...! Haha, that is why I would like to offer my help...! If you ever you want it... Love the stuff, regardless.... Kendrick Lamar is dope as well...! Any day now... You will be better at rhyming than I am...!