NOT ENOUGH

NOT ENOUGH

A Poem by The earth (Titan maphaha)
"

still behind god

"
as my levitating mind awakes it's google
meditating and contemplating
about the bestowed earth,
and lying animation
I get old

and this taming temptations twisting
human focus about the horror
that scripture foresees
I blame the earth that we are still
far behind

I sometimes blame education this knowledge
read and howl for more knowledge
more than I could think
but heaven is still ten steps
ahead.

© 2017 The earth (Titan maphaha)


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I liked your thoughts and your logic.
"and this taming temptations twisting
human focus about the horror
that scripture foresees
I blame the earth that we are still
far behind"
The above lines seem true for us. Always gathering and seeking more knowledge and things. I believe a wise life. Taking what we need and knowing what we want. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. You made me think this morning.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

7 Years Ago

Thanks man.......
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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The more we know, the more we want knowledge that speaks to us, You seem to have very complex and conflicting views.


and this taming temptations twisting
human focus about the horror
that scripture foresees
I blame the earth that we are still
far behind

that is my favorite bit because it makes me think outside my own box. Fine writing,

Posted 7 Years Ago


i really like the way you put your feelings together !!! great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem pulls you in and makes you think.
Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked your thoughts and your logic.
"and this taming temptations twisting
human focus about the horror
that scripture foresees
I blame the earth that we are still
far behind"
The above lines seem true for us. Always gathering and seeking more knowledge and things. I believe a wise life. Taking what we need and knowing what we want. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. You made me think this morning.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

7 Years Ago

Thanks man.......
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
well google can help with the topic i guess,but the rest is yours

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

7 Years Ago

yeah...u can help bruh
i don't think the internet will make up those ten steps...i think we have to run them ourselves.
i get old, too...
and really like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The earth (Titan maphaha)

7 Years Ago

thank u so much jacob

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The earth (Titan maphaha)
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Joburg, South Africa



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KENDRICK LAMAR IS MY WORLD AND J-COLE IS MY SECOND BEST, I'm doing my Masters degree in Mathematics in South Africa, And I'm tough in business studies, I also have a chess club which I created an.. more..

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