torn

when you trust and the trust is torn into hatred and shame

stubborn illusion and croocked hallucinations

trust is not truth

but corroded by licks

and lost words when grasped and torn to halves.

leaving a gore

and unrepaired skin

no the sinners seek and saw my north

and got attracted to my field

instead of going all civilised

they went all in

maybe is my stunning walks,

terrible attracting smiles

or shy kindness

that led history bleed to date

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

Great poem, friend....beautiful flow of words....and i loved it. Keep it up.

[The earth (Titan maphaha)]

thank you so much

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[stars are far]

yeah that's how most relationships end, whether friendship or whatever. lies break every beautiful thing in you mind.
that was a very good work. well done

[Maria]

very interesting read, and imagery as well.

[Sami Khalil]

"my stunning walks,
terrible attracting smiles
or shy kindness
that led history bleed:

[Sami Khalil]

It shows here that it all depends how you take things, good or bad. You can heal or injure...Excellent...:)...........

[pia]

Ahh this is sooo nice
I loved it...and i can feel the rushing emotions in this and feeling of how ot feels when trust is broken

[Katerina Grev]

interesting interpretation about broken trust, really unique

[Surya]

Thats interesting buddy...I enjoyed it..:)

[wordman]

what is truth,and trust is a state of mind,we really never completely trust anyone or anything..good write