I'm still asleep

I'm still asleep

A Poem by dear sydney;

I'm Still Asleep

I'm lying here sleeping, once again, dreaming of you.

I see you swaying in many different hues.

I see you motion me towards you,

but i can't help but to be confused.

You've never noticed me,

but i always noticed you.

this feeling you are giving me is so new and deep.

That's how i know I'm still asleep.

© 2009 dear sydney;


Author's Note

dear sydney;
We all dream, whether we like what's happening or not.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Very nicely done. I like the path to the ending. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

125 Views
1 Review
Added on March 12, 2009

Author

dear sydney;
dear sydney;

waiting for Christ, AL



About
My name is Sydney. I am a christian. I try my best to show it everyday, but I fall short of God's glory often. God is #1, I would be nothing without him. You can read me like an open book. I am fourte.. more..

Writing