Marriage

Marriage

A Poem by Sydney
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I wrote this to read aloud at my sisters wedding.

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I was her soulmate
And she was mine.
Till she found another
Who put up with her whine.
She has grown without me,
But she will always be in my mind.
Forever sisters
Our memories are intertwined.
As he found his way into her heart,
We will make some room for now he is a part.
So to my sister, you're my forever friend,
I wish you and him a love that never ends. 

© 2018 Sydney


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this is so so sweet :) it is a special bond, hard to let someone else in
no doubt she appreciates your words and love so much

Posted 6 Years Ago


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this is so sweet and beautiful i assume i might feel like this at my sister wedding someday

Posted 6 Years Ago


You know When my brother got married i had the same kind of feeling I was ticked off that he wanted to get married and ruin all the fun we were having

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully written. I call my sister my soul mate so can relate very much to think emotional writing. This has touched my heart. It is a pleasure to read and rich in spirit. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow the spirit of being sisters is remarkable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You should receive a rousing ovation reading this.well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


I don't know why but I got the feeling that you outgrew your sister. I don't have a sister, I have a complicated (but settled) relationship with my brother, and people I know that have siblings I cannot comprehend XD So I'm probably useless in perspective to this, but I have enjoyed reading this. You got a rhythm in your writing that is hard to master. Well-done indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sydney

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Aww.... so thoughtful and sweet. Some powerful and juicy lines in this piece, right from the beginning "soulmate" to the hope of "forever" between the three of you. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sydney

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I was crying as wrote it because I was so emotional.
emipoemi

6 Years Ago

I bet it was one of the top 5 most talked about moments of the event :)

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Added on March 17, 2018
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Sydney

Savannah, GA



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