Ode to Sally.

A poem to my cell phone. Thank you Stacey Lynn Nutt for giving me the idea to write this poem (:

Dear Sally, my darling mobile phone.
You have helped me connect.
I'm in dismay when we get to a dead zone.
The only time you can't keep conversations in check.

You're what I touch the most.
Your delicate keys One through nine and a through z.
To you Sally I propose a toast,
Without you who'd hear me?

You are a beauty all your own.
Your camera captures life.
I love to hear your ringtone.
With a phone like you, no reason to gripe.

Sally, I want this forever.
Our relationship can't end.
Let you go? I'll never.
Until, I get to upgrade again.

Reviews

Ha ha ... superb ... encore encore , this made me smile and it is morning here so a smile to start a day is great . This is one of your best writes .. with a twist in the end .. very uncommon topic and very very nicely written that too in a rhythm and rhyme format which is my favorite .. accolades and standing ovations for you .. :D :D Superb superb .... THE SIGNATURE SYD R EVANS indeed changeth .

[Arabdha]

this is so true when it comes to cellphones..really who would hear us without it?..enjoyed this one..good job

[Nat.]

haha this is sooo nice to read after reading so many depresing poems! I like that you are able to write poems with humor as well as beauty and seriousness.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

LOL This is cute, sweet and a little humerous. I think you are adoreable for writing this... Superb job!!!!

[GamingGal]

Poem: Tee-hee, this poem made me giggle. I love how you're all lovey-dovey, then add a twist at the end. It makes for a great read. And! I love how it's about something modern. People need to realize poetry is about what is around us and what we feel. Just because the Masters wrote about things from back then doesn't mean we have to. They wrote about what they felt and what was around them, too. The times have just changed. Alright, my rant is done.

Cons: None.

Overall: A cute, funny poem.

[Dilan Gray]

HA! I love this poem!!!! This was so cute and I love the ending, a very nice little twist! Great job, this made me smile and laugh! I loved it so much!

[trainwreck]

Pretty awesome!!!
I agree with this one hundred per cent.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

LOL! I'm sure your cell phone loves you too -- provided you don't accidentally run it thru the laundry.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't believe this story. Poor Sally will be dropped for the new phone that does everything. A interesting poem. I realize cell phones are important for the young people. A fun poem to read.
Coyote