Nationals in Florida.

Nationals in Florida.

A Poem by Sydney Evans
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I read this to my cheer team. We are going to nationals in florida @ disney world thursday (:

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Soon we'll be in Disney.
The happiest place on Earth.
All of it will be exciting.
Eaton Cheerleading will show it's worth.

We'll challenge other teams.
We'll go against the best.
To win is all of our dreams.
Can we stand the test?

We'll become closer.
That is my biggest goal.
A big group of sisters.
We'll go for the gold.

Remember who you are.
The best of eaton cheer.
We have to believe and we'll go far.
2011 is our year.


© 2011 Sydney Evans


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this one is peppy and has a happy feel to it..guess thats what cheerleaders do..very cute..

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really cute . The only thing that doesn't flow very well is "can we stand the test?" Maybe it would sound better if you said "Can we pass the test?". Other than that it is very cute :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pros: This poem just put me in a good mood, put a smile on my face. I like the pep in it, the optimism. It's something I'd expect to be beside the cheerleader page in the annual or something.

Cons: None.

Overall: I like the pep. It's good to read someone happy now and then.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good luck!!!! I liked this poem, it was cute and full of hope. You can feel the closeness of your team in it and your feelings towards them and the competition. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


campy? yeah.
kinda sappy? sure.
BUT, when in a situation where one has been there, changes the game.
My cousin is a competition cheerleader, has done the disney thing, has done the camp thing, knows all about the togetherness and the physics, and I, by default, am well versed in bases and fliers. Since I have seen it, it really is intense. These girls (or you girls I should say) work your bloomers off all year to get to the house that mouse built. Your fellow cheerleaders would be proud of this and those who have seen girls take a back tuck the wrong way and break something, knows how much the process means to ya.

be careful and Good luck Ms. Evans,


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pretty cool. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HUA ...!!!

what to say ?? .. except that I am becoming a fan of your writing as I read more and more from you .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWESOME!!!! GREAT JOB LADIES Cheerleading is hard, I know from experience..... I hope yall do a great job at final's and you better message me and tell me all about it when you get back!!!!!!! Great poem too

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! Congratulations on going to the National competition! Best of luck to your team! I'm sure this poem will inspire them :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very positive and good cheer. Anytime a group can gather and do something good together. It is a good time. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Sydney Evans

Eaton, OH



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