This is really cute . The only thing that doesn't flow very well is "can we stand the test?" Maybe it would sound better if you said "Can we pass the test?". Other than that it is very cute :)
Pros: This poem just put me in a good mood, put a smile on my face. I like the pep in it, the optimism. It's something I'd expect to be beside the cheerleader page in the annual or something.
Cons: None.
Overall: I like the pep. It's good to read someone happy now and then.
Good luck!!!! I liked this poem, it was cute and full of hope. You can feel the closeness of your team in it and your feelings towards them and the competition. Great job.
campy? yeah.
kinda sappy? sure.
BUT, when in a situation where one has been there, changes the game.
My cousin is a competition cheerleader, has done the disney thing, has done the camp thing, knows all about the togetherness and the physics, and I, by default, am well versed in bases and fliers. Since I have seen it, it really is intense. These girls (or you girls I should say) work your bloomers off all year to get to the house that mouse built. Your fellow cheerleaders would be proud of this and those who have seen girls take a back tuck the wrong way and break something, knows how much the process means to ya.
AWESOME!!!! GREAT JOB LADIES Cheerleading is hard, I know from experience..... I hope yall do a great job at final's and you better message me and tell me all about it when you get back!!!!!!! Great poem too