Beautiful Mind.

Beautiful Mind.

A Poem by Sydney Evans
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Poem, about a beautiful mind.

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Stop Yourself.
Scream to the wind.
Catch a breath.
Let it all in.

Keep moving.
Don't leave yourself behind.
Never let go.
Don't lose your beautiful mind.

© 2011 Sydney Evans


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I really like this poem. mostly becasue it's short and beautifuly writen. It keeps you wanting more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and sweet, flows well and tempo is excellent. I think you could add more to this, but its also great the way it is... Awsome job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, sweet, and to the point. I love it. Great job! Beautiful poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sydney,
I love your writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem. These are truly words of wisdom :)
Keep writing poems and such, I love reading them! You're a talented person.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem should be read once a day -- at least! Very good advice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


short and beautiful..thanks for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hard to keep the bad stuff out. Like you said in your words. Need to stop and begin again to be able to stay positive. I like the ending to the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting structure , which , though not exactly rhymying , does have a lyrical feel to it . It is very nice how you and it . Good Write .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice! I like the two stanza structure; its long enough to tell the story and not so long as to become boring. Great job here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sydney Evans
Sydney Evans

Eaton, OH



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